Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
This is my toy story hero quest slideshow. It was fun to make. We used kapwing to get the videos. You should watch toy story if you have not already, very cool. It took a while to make but was worth it at the end.
Very good work Brooke, thanks for the great effort with matching colours from the movies to your slides, but you need to deleted the slides 1-6 (from the task) and 12 onwards (after yours finishes)because I would rather you start your presentation from the beginning of yours, than my one. The course I was on on Friday 28th August was about SC DLO that students make and yours would have fitted the criteria they were looking for. Your slide colour scheme amplified the fun and joy this story has given its target audience. So, well done in terms of how your slide colour scheme matched the original posters. Another aspect of SC DLO's is the use of multimodal, for example Buzz Lightyear's famous saying, could be added as an audio file. I'm sure you, or a group of 9MY students could make a DLO that could teach students at our school and the primary school, how to make and insert audio files into a blog. Apologies this comment has taken so long to make, I hadn't realised that you had "hidden" you slide 6 slides into the one I had sent out to the whole class. Still, it was worth the wait, your presentation is very well done and I look forward to seeing it with just your work, not all the black slides around it.
Very good work Brooke, thanks for the great effort with matching colours from the movies to your slides, but you need to deleted the slides 1-6 (from the task) and 12 onwards (after yours finishes)because I would rather you start your presentation from the beginning of yours, than my one. The course I was on on Friday 28th August was about SC DLO that students make and yours would have fitted the criteria they were looking for. Your slide colour scheme amplified the fun and joy this story has given its target audience. So, well done in terms of how your slide colour scheme matched the original posters. Another aspect of SC DLO's is the use of multimodal, for example Buzz Lightyear's famous saying, could be added as an audio file. I'm sure you, or a group of 9MY students could make a DLO that could teach students at our school and the primary school, how to make and insert audio files into a blog. Apologies this comment has taken so long to make, I hadn't realised that you had "hidden" you slide 6 slides into the one I had sent out to the whole class. Still, it was worth the wait, your presentation is very well done and I look forward to seeing it with just your work, not all the black slides around it.
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